Story about Life as a Ghost
Zane
When I awoke, I was hovering over some random grave? I tried to go down but I couldn’t. I was just hovering in place and I couldn’t turn. I finally figured out how flouted down to see my name on the grave. This had to be a dream. I could finally move. I went to see my house. There were some random people in there. They were taking all my stuff out. My parents were all sad a crying. I could just flout around and that was it. I was still trying to figure out how I died. I had no idea of how it happened. I was showing up in people's photos that they took. They would wonder who it is and how did they do that. I was flying all around looking for the guy who threatened to kill me? Then it was lunch time and every one was just walking right though me. It was strange and very disturbing. When all the people cleared it was knight time in no time. It was very dark and no people around. When I knew it, I fell asleep on the side of the road. When I awoke again this time.
I was in my bed sleeping. Now that I am alive again, I could find the person who shot me. No one was down stars and no strangers either. I went for a walk and I saw him and he looked like he just seen a ghost. “How are you still alive after I shot you”? “I have no clue but I still have some bullet wounds from you”. He shot at me and missed and I ran at him to knock the gun out of his hands. Some people saw what we were doing and called the cops. I was still trying to get the gun before he tried to shoot at me again. By the time they got there my arm and leg were bleeding and had bullet holes in them. The guy was on the ground knocked out. When I got out of the hospital my parents were packing up all of my stuff and putting it in a van. We are moving to a house that is cheaper and has more room for us. When the stuff was all packed up and ready to go. We drove around the block and made it to our new home. It was just right down the street. No more dreams of being a ghost and time to live a normal life.
Student's Choice Reflection
Please answer all questions in complete, grammatically correct sentences.
1. Explain the process you went through to writhe this paper. Please be specific.
Teacher gave us a writing prompt. We wrote a story about. And here we are now.
2. I this paper narrative, expository, or argumentative? How do you know?
I have no clue what any of this is not a narrative that is all I know.
3. Tell me one thing you learned from writing this paper.
I didn't really learn much from this paper. It is like every other paper I write.
4. What are you particularly proud of in this paper?
I am not proud of anything in this paper it is all the same to me.
5. What does this paper show readers about you?
I have no clue what the paper shows about me.
Zane
When I awoke, I was hovering over some random grave? I tried to go down but I couldn’t. I was just hovering in place and I couldn’t turn. I finally figured out how flouted down to see my name on the grave. This had to be a dream. I could finally move. I went to see my house. There were some random people in there. They were taking all my stuff out. My parents were all sad a crying. I could just flout around and that was it. I was still trying to figure out how I died. I had no idea of how it happened. I was showing up in people's photos that they took. They would wonder who it is and how did they do that. I was flying all around looking for the guy who threatened to kill me? Then it was lunch time and every one was just walking right though me. It was strange and very disturbing. When all the people cleared it was knight time in no time. It was very dark and no people around. When I knew it, I fell asleep on the side of the road. When I awoke again this time.
I was in my bed sleeping. Now that I am alive again, I could find the person who shot me. No one was down stars and no strangers either. I went for a walk and I saw him and he looked like he just seen a ghost. “How are you still alive after I shot you”? “I have no clue but I still have some bullet wounds from you”. He shot at me and missed and I ran at him to knock the gun out of his hands. Some people saw what we were doing and called the cops. I was still trying to get the gun before he tried to shoot at me again. By the time they got there my arm and leg were bleeding and had bullet holes in them. The guy was on the ground knocked out. When I got out of the hospital my parents were packing up all of my stuff and putting it in a van. We are moving to a house that is cheaper and has more room for us. When the stuff was all packed up and ready to go. We drove around the block and made it to our new home. It was just right down the street. No more dreams of being a ghost and time to live a normal life.
Student's Choice Reflection
Please answer all questions in complete, grammatically correct sentences.
1. Explain the process you went through to writhe this paper. Please be specific.
Teacher gave us a writing prompt. We wrote a story about. And here we are now.
2. I this paper narrative, expository, or argumentative? How do you know?
I have no clue what any of this is not a narrative that is all I know.
3. Tell me one thing you learned from writing this paper.
I didn't really learn much from this paper. It is like every other paper I write.
4. What are you particularly proud of in this paper?
I am not proud of anything in this paper it is all the same to me.
5. What does this paper show readers about you?
I have no clue what the paper shows about me.